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Would love your critique on this image please. Had a fun weekend with family and a few wine's later resulted in this vivid series of 4 (see my gallery).
Thank you Dave, what is it about the bricks - the colour?
In my view its simply the fact its a brick wall harsh and not the prettiest thing in the world, and as the wall is out of focus, its very distracting.
I have seen this sort of composition done before in fact I have my own versions.
It works best with soft fabrics or netting that sort of thing give it another try the idea is worth pursuing.
Here is something I did a few years ago, taken with an Olympus E10.
I was just taking candid shots of my daughter and neice with wacky make up on, I wasn't trying to create a masterpiece that evening. I put it up for critique because I like the vivid colours. I agree what has been said about the wall being a harsh distraction though.
The beautiful image of Anna you show is stunning.
We all had a fun time anyway, photography can be fun and I try not to get too fussy about it sometimes.
I was just taking candid shots of my daughter and neice with wacky make up on, I wasn't trying to create a masterpiece that evening. I put it up for critique because I like the vivid colours. I agree what has been said about the wall being a harsh distraction though.
The beautiful image of Anna you show is stunning.
We all had a fun time anyway, photography can be fun and I try not to get too fussy about it sometimes.
Cheers
Gina
I understand you were having fun, and a good photographic idea has emerged. Get them in that wacky make-up again and some more suitable peak above/round props and you could come away with some stunning images, and have a lot more fun in the process.
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