Just wandering around.

[Tom Holle]

This was on purpose and I like it in a strange way. What do you think?

[Pops]

Re: Just wandering around.

The solitary berry does draw the eye.
Just had a little play with this and I reckon a crop from the bottom and the right side (up to the blurred berry) gives the main subject more impact

[Silo]

Re: Just wandering around.

it creates an indeterminate floating between the elements of visual language present, none of which dominate. It's not just a colour, line or form composition but all 3 and we have to decide which to focus on ...literally as the viewer. it grows on me the way it side-steps an obvious over-riding theme. It's a kind of "terrain vague" of close-ups
-cool Tom

[Tom Holle]

Re: Just wandering around.

Pops, Silo, thanks for your comments, appreciated.

[John Perriment]

Re: Just wandering around.

Somehow it works! I would crop the bottom to lose the berry in the bottom right corner then crop a bit off the left.

[Tom Holle]

Re: Just wandering around.

Thanks John