Window

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[Jocelyn Walker]

Re: Window

I like the RHS of the photo with its textured wall, and metal objects together with the background scenery, however I feel the object to the left detracts from the scene imho! What is that, a kind of loom or gymnasium equipment?

[Blithe]

Re: Window

Probably me just being boringly conventional, but I wonder why you have left out the left hand side. That being said, I like the feel of soft natural light coming in the window, picking out areas of interest. Also the fact that I can actually 'look' out of the window and see the scene. I think I would have lost the left hand side window altogether and concentrated on the window and wall on the right hand side. Not sure what that 'winding mechanism' (?) is, but I feel that it gets in the way just a bit too much.

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Re: Window

Thanks for the comments, theres actually alot more cropped from the right side, only cropped very slightly on the left as the edge of the window frame made the barrel distortion even more apparent! the mechanism is some sort of weaving machine, I thort it added to the forground interest.
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