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  • #2
    Re: 8th ave. candy store

    Looks very inviting but what candy store wouldn't :-)
    I find the left side of the shot a bit distracting from the main subject particularly that huge letter 'A'
    I would love to see a shot tighter on the candy store window showing off the vibrant colours and shapes etc of the packaging.
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    • #3
      Re: 8th ave. candy store

      I agree with Pops about the tighter crop - presumably that's a Pizza parlour next door?

      The colours are vibrant and that door does look inviting!
      carolannphotos.smugmug.com / webleedmusicmedia.com

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      • #4
        Re: 8th ave. candy store

        totally agree *smacking myself for not seeing that*
        how's this crop? i wanted to leave some life on the street.

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        • #5
          Re: 8th ave. candy store

          Much better - my eye was immediately drawn through that door to the goodies beyond (must resist..... )
          carolannphotos.smugmug.com / webleedmusicmedia.com

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          • #6
            Re: 8th ave. candy store

            What a wonderful shot.

            love it
            Dave R
            Cheers
            Dave R

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            • #7
              Re: 8th ave. candy store

              I like the second photograph. The eye falls immediately on the door, and then across the window. It makes me want to look inside. I wonder if a subtle colour boost would enliven it even more? I like the reflected colours in the grating on the pavement, and I am left wondering if the people on the right have just left the shop. For all it is quite a dark image it still feels very much full of life.

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