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    Hi Guys

    Any thoughts

    I've played around with this a little - any of the forum regulars give me anymore pointers.

    Cropped, healed, and warmed up so far.

    many thanks
    Dave R
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    Cheers
    Dave R

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    Re: A proper little madam

    Originally posted by mib2 View Post
    Hi Guys

    Any thoughts

    I've played around with this a little - any of the forum regulars give me anymore pointers.

    Cropped, healed, and warmed up so far.

    many thanks
    Dave R
    Hi Dave, a charming photo and one that show something of her character. Definitely one for the family album. Its well exposed with good skin tones so the warming up seems to have worked well.

    If I might be more critical though from the portrait standpoint, her hand looks as though its pushing her head up, I'd have preferred her chin to be much further down so you are not looking up the nose so much. For me her face isn't really in sharp focus, the fabric of the settee looks a little sharper. Also I might have been more wary of the background in the top left. The conservatory window and reflections are a distraction. However as a family photo it works pretty well
    Stephen

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      Re: A proper little madam

      FWIW, I don't like the reflections on the left. I was drawn straight to that when I looked at the picture.

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        Re: A proper little madam

        I like the pose, skin tone and that cheeky smile.
        Don't like the cluttered background though
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          Re: A proper little madam

          Something along these lines would be better.

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            Re: A proper little madam

            Much better Ron.
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              Re: A proper little madam

              Originally posted by lumix View Post
              Something along these lines would be better.

              Ah, this is more like it! Nice work Ron.

              I was going to mention about the reflections also, but the crop has sorted it nicely.
              The slightly out of focus has a nice softening effect to the skin.

              Although the pose is a little awkward, its still al lovely picture, and one which I would certainly put on the mantle if she were a relative.
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                Re: A proper little madam

                Hi Guys

                Many thanks for your help - all will be taken on board.

                Cheers
                Dave R
                Cheers
                Dave R

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                • #9
                  Re: A proper little madam

                  A super family photograph, Improved no end by Rons crop, The softness does not detract from the image, it is a technique used often in portraiture. Very nice.
                  Catch Ya Later
                  Tinka

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