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    Hi,
    This is a the second image posted of the flowers on a cacti belonging to my good Lady Wife. I hope this is an improvement on the first, your feedback, comments and critiques are welcome.
    Catch Ya Later
    Tinka

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    Re: First Flower 2

    Originally posted by Tinka View Post
    Hi,
    This is a the second image posted of the flowers on a cacti belonging to my good Lady Wife. I hope this is an improvement on the first, your feedback, comments and critiques are welcome.

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    • #3
      Re: First Flower 2

      Hi Patrick,
      Many thanks for looking, and your critique, your input is valuable and appreciated, and your points taken on board.
      Catch Ya Later
      Tinka

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        I have looked at it some more, is the flower still available, perhaps a re-shoot using the same approach but less of the out of focus stuff around the flower head , this rough edit for example. I may have gone to fare but you get the idea.



        Patrick
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          You have a superb focus on the flower but Like Patrick said, there is to much clutter around it.
          Patrick solved the background clutter prob but......I would have preferred a section of the stem to be visible. It looks a bit like it was added to the image and not a part of it.
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            Re: First Flower 2

            Originally posted by Pops View Post
            You have a superb focus on the flower but Like Patrick said, there is to much clutter around it.
            Patrick solved the background clutter prob but......I would have preferred a section of the stem to be visible. It looks a bit like it was added to the image and not a part of it.

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            • #7
              Re: First Flower 2

              Originally posted by Patrick View Post
              I have looked at it some more, is the flower still available, perhaps a re-shoot using the same approach but less of the out of focus stuff around the flower head , this rough edit for example. I may have gone to fare but you get the idea.



              Patrick
              I overlooked this picture earlier in the day - didn't realise what I had missed and Patrick has done exactly what I would have done - ver nice indeed.

              If you can follow Patrick's example and make the kind of edits he has suggested, this has the makings of a POTD - and that would be your second, Tinka!

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                Originally posted by Ian View Post
                I overlooked this picture earlier in the day - didn't realise what I had missed and Patrick has done exactly what I would have done - ver nice indeed.

                If you can follow Patrick's example and make the kind of edits he has suggested, Ian

                Hi all,
                Many thanks for your critiques, comments/suggestions, all points have been taken on board and noted, will have to have a go, Practice is the only way to learn. OH, by the way, there are nos stems as the flowers occur at the very tip of the leaves, so I will have to work round that one, also the flowers are comeing out and going over fairly fast so will have to watch for the next one and work quickly.
                Catch Ya Later
                Tinka

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