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  • Seaside Pier

    Any thoughts and comments on this Photo. Cheers.

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    [QUOTE=Andrew Thatcher;6090]Any thoughts and comments on this Photo. Cheers.

    Hi Andrew,
    A terrific image and a great viewpoint, love the stormy out look, could do with a bit of Zap though, it looks flat on my monitor, could try adjusting the levels and/or curves a bit?
    Nice work.
    Catch Ya Later
    Tinka

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    • #3
      Re: Seaside Pier

      Originally posted by Andrew Thatcher View Post
      Any thoughts and comments on this Photo. Cheers.


      Hi Andrew,

      The photo is nice. If you could have avoided (or cropped different) that little visible part of the ground on the bottom left then we wouldn't be able to understand from where you took the photo

      It could have been taken while you were on a little boat sailing across the Pier


      Regards

      George

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      • #4
        Re: Seaside Pier

        I like the play of light between the blue sky above and the sunset-rain on the horizon. The pier seems to lead my eye out of the picture (According to RULE #67.A.1 subsection b-), but what are rules for except to acknowledge when they have been broken. Good shot.

        Joe

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        • #5
          Re: Seaside Pier

          Originally posted by Andrew Thatcher View Post
          Any thoughts and comments on this Photo. Cheers.
          Compositionally it certainly works for me. It's intriguing and it flows nicely, which is half the battle

          It looks (please correct me if I'm mistaken) as if you've used a highlight/shadow recovery function in order to retrieve some detail from the original. Nothing at all wrong with that, but in this case it's left you with a image largely biased towards midtones - particularly in the sky and upper section of the pier itself. It definitely needs more contrast to give it the punch that (I feel) it needs, so I'd probably be using the curves tool - selectively - to address that. I'd be tempted to straighten the left verticals too, but that's entirely down to personal taste.

          Otherwise it's great. Something a little different, which is definitely a compliment

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          • #6
            Re: Seaside Pier

            Great composition and lots to grab attention, but as has been mentioned the picture is lacking punch in the light or colours. Pretty sure its not my monitor.

            Best regards

            Josh
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            • #7
              Re: Seaside Pier

              Thanks for your thoughts guys i'll do a regig of it soon.
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              • #8
                Re: Seaside Pier

                Andrew, I don't think you ever mentioned if you had used the S/H tool on this image. If you did use it, I was wondering if the Photomatix tonemapping plugin may have given a more contrasty and punchy result
                Stephen

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                • #9
                  Re: Seaside Pier

                  The sky is the best part for me. A real mix of moods.
                  Now if you could just clone out the pier :-)
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                  • #10
                    Re: Seaside Pier

                    Originally posted by Stephen View Post
                    Andrew, I don't think you ever mentioned if you had used the S/H tool on this image. If you did use it, I was wondering if the Photomatix tonemapping plugin may have given a more contrasty and punchy result
                    I used the stand alone Photomatix. just dont think i done a very good job on it will try it again soon.
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                    • #11
                      Re: Seaside Pier

                      Andrew Its a little dark and oppressive. I am not qualified to comment on technique, I like the composition. Maybe fiddle with levels.
                      Guy McLaren
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                      Pity about the cheap glass.

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